Well done for writing the beginning of your story! I like the title The Magic Lamp. Remember use capitals for titles and to press return to start writing on a different line. Which other sentence opener could you have used instead of ‘Then’ in the last sentence? (Think of a sentence opener that adds to the story and sounds more exciting…)
Well done for writing the beginning of your story! I like the title The Magic Lamp. Remember use capitals for titles and to press return to start writing on a different line. Which other sentence opener could you have used instead of ‘Then’ in the last sentence? (Think of a sentence opener that adds to the story and sounds more exciting…)