Is very good we liked the part were you described Skellig
But the only thing was that you spelt ‘Barely’ wrong
Really good work 🙂
From Maste and Sam ♥
I like the way you put more details like twenty seven and fifty three. You maybe need to included more adjective to make your writing more powerful and well done again
Maybe spell Almond without the s other than that it was fine
Is very good we liked the part were you described Skellig
But the only thing was that you spelt ‘Barely’ wrong
Really good work 🙂
From Maste and Sam ♥
I like the way you put more details like twenty seven and fifty three. You maybe need to included more adjective to make your writing more powerful and well done again