Teddy this blog is brilliant you could improve on your first sentence.
nice work Teddy I like your story because it punctuation and I think you can improve on the background
Teddy maybe you can improve the first sentence, to describe the jacket abit more. I like the way you used punctuation in your story. lovely background colour it isn’t ordinary.
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Teddy this blog is brilliant
you could improve on your first sentence.
nice work Teddy I like your story
because it punctuation and I think you can improve on the background
Teddy maybe you can improve the first sentence, to describe the jacket abit more. I like the way you used punctuation in your story. lovely background colour it isn’t ordinary.