I like that this is on one of the lucky family’s side because the whole family is going. I it is well punctuated. I would like to know what happened when they got there.
Great! We really like it, most people just did evacuee’s being really sad and crying, but yours was just the opposite, excited and happy, making friends straight away.
Very emotional, I liked the way it was a happy story, that her mum came with her. Also I liked this : ‘Her face as pale as snow.’ But, there were a few sentences that didn’t make sense.
tacy well done:) I like your post I would love it I was evacuated I was like that
would you like to be like this girl?
I like that this is on one of the lucky family’s side because the whole family is going. I it is well punctuated. I would like to know what happened when they got there.
Great! We really like it, most people just did evacuee’s being really sad and crying, but yours was just the opposite, excited and happy, making friends straight away.
Nice story, It’d be really fun being evacuated like that. I’m sure that nobody else put that twist on their story
Very emotional, I liked the way it was a happy story, that her mum came with her. Also I liked this : ‘Her face as pale as snow.’ But, there were a few sentences that didn’t make sense.