Really depressing and interesting, I liked the way you ended with ‘I can only hope for her’. However you didn’t use commas and ‘I felt depressed heartbroken’ it doesn’t make sense.
The “I”s aren’t capital and spelling mistakes. Except for that its very good.
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Really depressing and interesting, I liked the way you ended with ‘I can only hope for her’. However you didn’t use commas and ‘I felt depressed heartbroken’ it doesn’t make sense.
The “I”s aren’t capital and spelling mistakes. Except for that its very good.