Hi Tilia,
I really like your blog.
I love your vocabulary and your reasons to back things up eg;’My favorite part it is when Ivan sleeps in a snowdrift because it is unusal for someone to sleep in a snowdrift (by the way someone is one word.)
Can you find an adjective to describe Ivan?
You could of used more punctuation instead of full stops.
I like when you said thriller I think lots of people will like to read the book just because of this word. Did you choose this word to draw people in? Also I know you can do way better try using different adjectives to describe the events. So good luck making it better.
Hi Tilia,
Your blog post is amazing!!! I really like it because you wrote a short blub.
I also like it because you have written very a powefull adjective.
Did you read the word thrilling somewere?
Next time you could maybe you could not change the colour at the end because it looks likes it changes colour.
Hi Tilia,
I really like your blog.
I love your vocabulary and your reasons to back things up eg;’My favorite part it is when Ivan sleeps in a snowdrift because it is unusal for someone to sleep in a snowdrift (by the way someone is one word.)
Can you find an adjective to describe Ivan?
You could of used more punctuation instead of full stops.
From Eva.
Hi Tilia
I like the blog but it doesn’t make sense when you wrote is where Ivan he sleeps in a snowdrift I also like the rest of the sentences.
Good suggestion Zak. Be more specific tell Tilia exactly what you like about her work.
I like when you said thriller I think lots of people will like to read the book just because of this word. Did you choose this word to draw people in? Also I know you can do way better try using different adjectives to describe the events. So good luck making it better.
Hi Tilia,
Your blog post is amazing!!! I really like it because you wrote a short blub.
I also like it because you have written very a powefull adjective.
Did you read the word thrilling somewere?
Next time you could maybe you could not change the colour at the end because it looks likes it changes colour.