Olivers World War I

2 Responses to Olivers World War I

1. mshuttleworth says:

   November 14, 2014 at 4:27 pm

   Brilliant Oliver, I wished you had used a couple of adverbial openers to really powerful piece to life. The animals seem to be an afterthought.
2. Josie Gradwell says:

   November 16, 2014 at 1:43 pm

   I like the use of short sentences. It gives a feeling of pace and tension.

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