I like the describing words good punctuation riley
I really like your title and the part I like is when it says that the dog was shivering as well. 🙂
you didn’t put …as it shivered, they…
I liked your story a lot :)But the bit where it sais ‘as it shivered they’ didn’t really make sense. ♥:)♥:)♥
It is good describing words but you used shivering to much.
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I like the describing words good punctuation riley
I really like your title and the part I like is when it says that the dog was shivering as well. 🙂
you didn’t put …as it shivered, they…
I liked your story a lot :)But the bit where it sais ‘as it shivered they’ didn’t really make sense.
♥:)♥:)♥
It is good describing words but you used shivering to much.