From Tamzin and Maste You wrote carefully witch means that you thought about what you were going to say. Your speech is in the rite place. what you could improve on is to make it a bit longer and try o make it clear
Very creative. We like the theme of the scary evening, but just check the presentation of your writing. Lovely.
by Amy & Saskia
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From Tamzin and Maste
You wrote carefully witch means that you thought about what you were going to say. Your speech is in the rite place.
what you could improve on is to make it a bit longer and try o make it clear
Very creative. We like the theme of the scary evening, but just check the presentation of your writing. Lovely.
by Amy & Saskia