Great Sas. I love it! So mysterious….. And it leaves you hanging with loads of questions! How was her friend there? What was chasing her? And why? Was her friend there before, she just didn’t see her? Or had she just appeared? Its so spooky! Please write some more, I really want to know what happened next! Only you need to remember that speech goes on a new line… But apart from that, Amazing!
Great Sas. I love it! So mysterious….. And it leaves you hanging with loads of questions! How was her friend there? What was chasing her? And why? Was her friend there before, she just didn’t see her? Or had she just appeared? Its so spooky! Please write some more, I really want to know what happened next! Only you need to remember that speech goes on a new line… But apart from that, Amazing!