I would avoid saying the nickname “Meme” and also a few spelling mistakes and I doubt it is 100 words. But a good imaginative piece of writing. Also avoid using so much dialogue. Try using a line between pieces of speech. It makes it clearer for people to read. Well done!
I really enjoyed your work so much, Its brilliant work,
Jsut want to tell you keep up the good work.
It’s good but you have used too much speach for my liking.
I would avoid saying the nickname “Meme” and also a few spelling mistakes and I doubt it is 100 words. But a good imaginative piece of writing. Also avoid using so much dialogue. Try using a line between pieces of speech. It makes it clearer for people to read. Well done!
Really good Mia.
Also avoid using so much dialogue.