I’m a bit confused however it might just be an error. In the first paragraph you said:
“My friend and I ” and in the second paragraph it said:
“My friend’s and I”. Maybe you should edit your work but well done for using correct grammar.
It’s ok but in the first paragraph you say my friend and I went out for a long walk which is good but then in the second paragraph you said my friend’s and I and you’ve almost introduced a few more carachters in a matter of seconds.
I realy enjoyed it, remeber to put fullstops.
Mayar
I’m a bit confused however it might just be an error. In the first paragraph you said:
“My friend and I ” and in the second paragraph it said:
“My friend’s and I”. Maybe you should edit your work but well done for using correct grammar.
She’s right. BUT… it’s really good! well done
boutheyna
It’s ok but in the first paragraph you say my friend and I went out for a long walk which is good but then in the second paragraph you said my friend’s and I and you’ve almost introduced a few more carachters in a matter of seconds.
nice work hollie [: