Hi Demi, Your story/essay/peice of writing is amazing. I don’t think I would have been able to think up the idea of writing a essay as good as that. I don’t really like English. I’m better at Maths What are you good at?
Lovely sentiments and ideas. Please remember to punctuate your sentences correctly. There are a few fullstops and capital letters missing.
Really good story just remember I is always capital on its own. Great try, but mabye use more punctuation add more fullstops 🙂
Great work Demi, just check the first sentence. There are few missing words!
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Hi Demi,
Your story/essay/peice of writing is amazing. I don’t think I would have been able to think up the idea of writing a essay as good as that. I don’t really like English. I’m better at Maths
What are you good at?
Lovely sentiments and ideas. Please remember to punctuate your sentences correctly. There are a few fullstops and capital letters missing.
Really good story just remember I is always capital on its own. Great try, but mabye use more punctuation add more fullstops 🙂
Great work Demi, just check the first sentence. There are few missing words!