Liked your work but remember puntuations when writing! Great work
Awwww well done Greta, that story was Epic it brought tears to my eys geat work 🙂 By Cc
That made me cry so much it was really good and the wayyou said his blood flew across his body slowly.Good punctuation a bit more full stops and capitals letters. 🙂 By Norah
That was a brillant story that was really sad about the war.
Well done greta you used connectives and adjectives. Your work was fab, I loved it.
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Liked your work but remember puntuations when writing! Great work
Awwww well done Greta, that story was Epic it brought tears to my eys geat work 🙂
By Cc
That made me cry so much it was really good and the wayyou said his blood flew across his body slowly.Good punctuation a bit more full stops and capitals letters. 🙂 By Norah
That was a brillant story that was really sad about the war.
Well done greta you used connectives and adjectives. Your work was fab, I loved it.