Great choice about the philipines. Cool pictures by the way!! As I was saying, try to add more writing to it.
That’s great, no spelling mistakes and great emotion but you could add more to it 🙂
well done
Mia I like it its a bit short but good. I like the pictures.
Wow mia no spelling mistakes and great punctuation.
Wow your work is amazing! I love how you’ve thought about the children who need help. The pictures could have been better.
wow mia your punctuaton is very good I like how you thought about children try to add more .
from mahmud
I mite donate but that was fantastic work.
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Great choice about the philipines. Cool pictures by the way!! As I was saying, try to add more writing to it.
That’s great, no spelling mistakes and great emotion but you could add more to it 🙂
well done
Mia I like it its a bit short but good.
I like the pictures.
Wow mia no spelling mistakes and great punctuation.
Wow your work is amazing!
I love how you’ve thought about the children who need help.
The pictures could have been better.
wow mia your punctuaton is very good I like how you thought about children try to add more .
from mahmud
I mite donate but that was fantastic work.