A few spelling mistakes but it’s a really good rap/song/poem.
I really like your rap /song/poem . Your Anti bulling song is amazing song though. but there are some missed spellings.
I like that you changed a rap to make it your own type of rap.Cool writing by the way!!! Great rap, a bit to much for me to read though.
Hi Erdis its Pez it was great but their were a few spelling mistakes. They were bubble and causing but apart from that it was great
I like the way you made a peice of writting into a rap but try and make your sentences a bit longer by using conecnectives it was good well done!!!!! from Chloie
really good rap but you have made a few spelling mistakes, overall it was brilliant
that rap was awesome I couldn’t believe my eyes nice one erdis please teach me how I have to admit you got some pretty nice bars.
good but left out a full stop at the end
Good work but you need full stops and missed a full stop at the end off the sentence.
I really like your song/rap/poem but like the others said you forgot your spelling mistakes. Bye
Nice rap. But there was a few spelling mistakes like bubble.
your RAP is very good but next time add your full-stops
There rap was cool Erdis but don’t forget spelling mistake.
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A few spelling mistakes but it’s a really good rap/song/poem.
I really like your rap /song/poem . Your Anti bulling song is amazing song though. but there are some missed spellings.
I like that you changed a rap to make it your own type of rap.Cool writing by the way!!! Great rap, a bit to much for me to
read though.
Hi Erdis its Pez it was great but their were a few spelling mistakes. They were bubble and causing but apart from that it was great
I like the way you made a peice of writting into a rap but try and make your sentences a bit longer by using conecnectives it was good well done!!!!! from Chloie
really good rap but you have made a few spelling mistakes, overall it was brilliant
that rap was awesome I couldn’t believe my eyes nice one erdis please teach me how I have to admit you got some pretty nice bars.
good but left out a full stop at the end
Good work but you need full stops and missed a full stop at the end off the sentence.
I really like your song/rap/poem but like the others said you forgot your spelling mistakes.
Bye
Nice rap. But there was a few spelling mistakes like bubble.
your RAP is very good but next time add your full-stops
There rap was cool Erdis but don’t forget spelling mistake.