After ‘footsteps behind me’ you need a full stop but a great piece of writing apart from that 🙂
That is good but Gangnam style, you should do move like Jagger, anyway you should make the sentence longer and make a name for the person. 😛
Very good even though there are a few capital letters missing. The colour on the text makes it very easy to read and there are no missing full stops. So very well done!!!!
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Wow Chloe this is very funny and there was no missing full stops but any ways well done.
Well done Chloe! that was a really good piece of writing and I really like the way you have chosen the blue with the orange (it really stands out)
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After ‘footsteps behind me’ you need a full stop but a great piece of writing apart from that 🙂
That is good but Gangnam style, you should do move like Jagger, anyway you should make the sentence longer and make a name for the person. 😛
Very good even though there are a few capital letters missing. The colour on the text makes it very easy to read and there are no missing full stops. So very well done!!!!
sent by Finn
Wow Chloe this is very funny and there was no missing full stops but any ways well done.
Well done Chloe! that was a really good piece of writing
and I really like the way you have chosen the blue with the orange (it really stands out)