I really liked it.But some of it didn’t make sense. Good job well done
By Billy
We really like your story you have spelt everything right, but you have missed out a lot of punctuation and you have included some words that you didn’t need to add. We can’t wait to read your next blog! Well done DEMI! By Faith and Olivia .Dobson.
Nice writing but after old black stairs there’s a full stop. Good bye
Demmy that was very good but you have to change the colour.( I can not read it)
I like your blog Demi but remember your capital letters.By Shannon.
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I really liked it.But some of it didn’t make sense. Good job well done
By Billy
We really like your story you have spelt everything right, but you have missed out a lot of punctuation and you have included some words that you didn’t need to add. We can’t wait to read your next blog! Well done DEMI!
By Faith and Olivia .Dobson.
Nice writing but after old black stairs there’s a full stop. Good bye
Demmy that was very good but you have to change the colour.( I can not read it)
I like your blog Demi but remember your capital letters.By Shannon.