the orange turtle

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6 Responses to the orange turtle

  1. clarf says:

    I think it’s quite good but the colour keeps changing so it’s hard to read, but otherwise it would be really good!!

    sent by Finn

  2. treno says:

    Remember to do the capital letters and your full stops but look no full stops.

  3. thomd says:

    You have to put some capital letter at the start you spell wanted wrong to and missed a full stop good work Hollie

  4. mayan says:

    This is amazing but, you spelt wanted wrong and you missed out some full stop

  5. abdih says:

    You have wonderful ideas, the only thing is you’ve forgot your spelling, full stops and capital letters. Overall 🙁

  6. grubj says:

    A great blog Hollie. But you should of remembered to spell wanted right and your full stop’s plus CAPPITAL LETTER’S(IMPORTANT)!!!!!!!!!!!

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