I like how you did the story but, most of your sentences don’t make sense like She found a an empty field a stone statue of Jack was facing her she was petrified and heartbroken so she hugged him and slow really steadily he was turning back into a human being.
I like how you did the story but, most of your sentences don’t make sense like She found a an empty field a stone statue of Jack was facing her she was petrified and heartbroken so she hugged him and slow really steadily he was turning back into a human being.