Good piece of writing we loved it but you made one tiny mistake that was the word hoped that should be hopped in to our swimming suits. You did really well :):):):):):_:
We really enjoyed it but why was the ice cream cart black cause black attracts heat so the ice cream would melt. Also you used good language to describe the excitement of the holiday…
This is a great piece of writing Mia I hope you are proud of this writing. 🙂
Good piece of writing we loved it but you made one tiny mistake that was the word hoped that should be hopped in to our swimming suits. You did really well :):):):):):_:
We really enjoyed it but why was the ice cream cart black cause black attracts heat so the ice cream would melt. Also you used good language to describe the excitement of the holiday…
By Sian and Louis
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