That was a good peace of writing but remember to use more punctuation like commas, But it was a good story and I wonder what that scary figure is at the door 🙂
that was good but you talk about your best friend and put openers and full stops you punctuation it will make you story better
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That was a good peace of writing but remember to use more punctuation like commas, But it was a good story and I wonder what that scary figure is at the door 🙂
that was good but you talk about your best friend and put openers and full stops you punctuation it will make you story better