Your story was really effective with all the adjectives and verbs. I especially like the begging of the second paragraph were it says ‘my mum greeted me’.
Great story Rico I love your story so much you should become a Author when you are older. I love how you described what was happening I can picture every moment in my head
Your story was really effective with all the adjectives and verbs. I especially like the begging of the second paragraph were it says ‘my mum greeted me’.
Your story is good but i don’t get what you mean by “purplish”.
Great story Rico I love your story so much you should become a Author when you are older. I love how you described what was happening I can picture every moment in my head
Amazing! I love your story! You added lots of nice, powerful adjectives and verbs!