I like your story, but there is one more step in the first paragraph than there is in the second one.
Yes, what happen to the fire? but otherwise really good.
Fire? What happened to it? Good story.
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I like your story, but there is one more step in the first paragraph than there is in the second one.
Yes, what happen to the fire?
but otherwise really good.
Fire? What happened to it? Good story.