Another cliffhanger I’m seeing, which is great. So basically, you looked up and there was a spookay story? I’m not sure if it is a cliffhanger or not. But anyways…
#SPOOKAY
Spooky story and its so suspenseful i really want to know what happens next it gets me thinking what has happened, I think this paragraph you have made is a great cliffhanger and short sentences make it even scarier, you could probably make a story.
I also like the spaces between the beginning and the bony fingers bit.
Well done amazing description of the man … so spookay.
Nice story and great description
WOW this is a GREAT story. Do you know the best thing about it…
THE FONT 🙂
the adjectives you use are really powerful too.
I love the suspense but why did you have those two separate paragraphs at the top
I like your story and how you made it suspenseful. I also liked how you done short sentences.
Another cliffhanger I’m seeing, which is great. So basically, you looked up and there was a spookay story? I’m not sure if it is a cliffhanger or not. But anyways…
#SPOOKAY
Wow, I really like you suspense story! I love how you have suspense all the way through. It intrigues you from the beginning.
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Spooky story and its so suspenseful i really want to know what happens next it gets me thinking what has happened, I think this paragraph you have made is a great cliffhanger and short sentences make it even scarier, you could probably make a story.
Its suspenseful because you put ellipsis at the end of the story and how you put your feelings in.
Adam I loved it with the short sentences and it was SOOPKAY.
This is a brilliant story, and is very well written!
Adam I loved it very soopkay keep up the good work !!!!!!!!
This is a brilliant story, it is very well written! 🙂