I like your story and your descriptive writting like the way you said the ‘eerie’ night . good job
Good story Abdi, I like it because there is suspense. It is spooky how the character keeps on popping up!
There are a lot of errors and I didn’t really get it.
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I like your story and your descriptive writting like the way you said the ‘eerie’ night .
good job
Good story Abdi, I like it because there is suspense. It is spooky how the character keeps on popping up!
There are a lot of errors and I didn’t really get it.