This is a really good poem. It’s really interesting Next time maybe say what you did on christmas but that was really cool
Great Imogen! This is really good. Next time try to space out your words by using more sentences. This was awesome and I could really feel I was in the scene. From Francesca
Great story Imogen. Maybe next time put in more full stops. I really liked it Enzo
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This is a really good poem. It’s really interesting
Next time maybe say what you did on christmas but that was really cool
Great Imogen! This is really good.
Next time try to space out your words by using more sentences.
This was awesome and I could really feel I was in the scene.
From Francesca
Great story Imogen.
Maybe next time put in more full stops.
I really liked it Enzo