I really like it foggh it is really good but you forgot that the some of the letter`s haven`t got capital letter`s in your pharagraph but it is good well done keep up the good work.
Great story holly. Maybe go back and make sure some of the text at the end makes sense. other than that it’s great well done .
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I really like it foggh it is really good but you forgot that the some of the letter`s haven`t got capital letter`s in your pharagraph but it is good well done keep up the good work.
Great story holly.
Maybe go back and make sure some of the text at the end makes sense.
other than that it’s great well done .