Really funny Francesca, I really liked the way that you used adjectives.
Maybe next time you could try to make your sentences shorter.
I like how you included Monkey pre-school.
Amazing story Francesca
The only thing you could improve on is there are a few random bits of text here and there
apart from that it’s great I loved it
Enzo
Really funny Francesca, I really liked the way that you used adjectives.
Maybe next time you could try to make your sentences shorter.
I like how you included Monkey pre-school.
Amazing story Francesca
The only thing you could improve on is there are a few random bits of text here and there
apart from that it’s great I loved it
Enzo