Very colorful. Make sure you self edit to avoid spelling mistakes. Careful copying and pasting.
you could have corected the title.but nise
the title is spelt wrong but it is great
good job try to correct things that you spelt wrong after that it is great
i like your work because you wrote about everything
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Lots of facts in there great blog. Try and put your full stops in the rite place. lots of descriptive writing about food healthy and unhealthy. Well done.
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Very colorful.
Make sure you self edit to avoid spelling mistakes.
Careful copying and pasting.
you could have corected the title.but nise
the title is spelt wrong but it is great
good job try to correct things that you spelt wrong after that it is great
i like your work because you wrote about everything
l rele leik your wark you kan inprov
Lots of facts in there great blog.
Try and put your full stops in the rite place.
lots of descriptive writing about food healthy and unhealthy. Well done.