WOW louis i love this poem i think you could leave a full stop before water bresk though great poem
a lovely story i see you love basketball maybe use a little more capital letters but a very sleek story
This is a great peace of text louis try not to use the same words to much but I love that you done it about your one of your hobbies . carlee
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WOW louis i love this poem i think you could leave a full stop before water bresk though great poem
a lovely story i see you love basketball
maybe use a little more capital letters
but a very sleek story
This is a great peace of text louis try not to use the same words to much but I love that you done it about your one of your hobbies .
carlee