Well done Imogen, this is a great poem as it has great rhyming and good adjectives. Next time think about using different words that mean the same, such as ‘everywhere’. I also liked how it set the scene, I really felt like I was there.
AMAZING!!!! Imogen well done on the rhyming you did a graet job on that next time you could ad some repitision
AMAZING!!!! Imogen well done on the rhyming you did a graet job on that
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Well done Imogen, this is a great poem as it has great rhyming and good adjectives.
Next time think about using different words that mean the same, such as ‘everywhere’.
I also liked how it set the scene, I really felt like I was there.
AMAZING!!!! Imogen well done on the rhyming you did a graet job on that
next time you could ad some repitision
AMAZING!!!! Imogen well done on the rhyming you did a graet job on that