Well Abdi this is quite something really I think you could do better but don’t worry other than the story its really good though.
You can clearly see the words that you had to use and they don’t fit in. The adjectives you use are a bit rubbish like fun.
MISTAKES:
a capitalized he
you say ”swimming he went swimming’ which is wrong
Y-Dan I really liked your battle between liquid nitrogen vs hot flames I can’t wait to
see your battle tomorrow
Well Abdi this is quite something really I think you could do better but don’t worry other than the story its really good though.
You can clearly see the words that you had to use and they don’t fit in. The adjectives you use are a bit rubbish like fun.
MISTAKES:
a capitalized he
you say ”swimming he went swimming’ which is wrong
Well done Abdi I think this is really fun
next time try to use more ajectives but other than that it was a great blog