Great story but I think you need a explanation for who was laughing at you. You forgot to put a space for ‘have fun’, but still, it was great.
Your story is amazing it was really funny i couldn’t stop laughing but my father was myfather and doesn’t count was punctuated in correctly.
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Great story but I think you need a explanation for who was laughing at you. You forgot to put a space for ‘have fun’, but still, it was great.
Your story is amazing it was really funny i couldn’t stop laughing but my father was myfather and doesn’t count was punctuated in correctly.