Hansel and Gretel

4 Responses to Hansel and Gretel

1. Bianca Maria says:

   July 5, 2017 at 10:30 am

   Tesoro, I really enjoyed your story. It is rich in detailed description, which makes the forest come alive and brings the reader to the scene! I also loved the lively dialogue between Hansel and Gretel. Brava!!
2. Bianca Maria says:

   July 5, 2017 at 10:35 am

   Maybe next time you can add the inverted commas to clearly mark the dialogue. Still, well done!
   • Elettra says:

     July 11, 2017 at 3:04 pm

     Thanks for the advice.I’ll try and use it next time.‍
3. Elettra Sofia says:

   July 14, 2017 at 10:15 am

   Thanks for the advice.I’ll try and use it next time

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