Hansel and Gretel by Jad

Posted on June 9, 2017 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to Hansel and Gretel by Jad

  1. simmf says:
    June 9, 2017 at 1:20 pm

    I love the goinnnnnnnnng

  2. marca says:
    June 9, 2017 at 1:21 pm

    I like it because you had a good story.
    why did you write goinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng?
    you need spell things better.

  3. Magalie says:
    June 26, 2017 at 9:58 am

    I love the great adjectives in your story Jad. Next time, make sure you have read through it. Well done!!!

  4. tremblay léon-georges grandfather says:
    June 26, 2017 at 1:14 pm

    Hantel and Cretel are frightfal because they hearing the scream of wolfs.. and puzzle…..this history in wonderfull.

  5. tremblay ingrid says:
    June 26, 2017 at 1:27 pm

    Hansel et Gretel is not prudent because they are young. this forest is very darkness for the kids. An other,the trees are magical and gloomy.

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