Hansel and Gretel by Finn

Posted on June 9, 2017 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to Hansel and Gretel by Finn

  1. Ms del Pozo says:
    June 9, 2017 at 6:09 am

    Great writing Finn! Would you be able to read it back to mum and dad at home?

  2. simmf says:
    June 9, 2017 at 1:14 pm

    Work on the puncshuation .

  3. berna says:
    June 9, 2017 at 1:17 pm

    Your spelling has got better.Look for a o split e word where you forget the e at the end.

  4. monti says:
    June 16, 2017 at 1:27 pm

    Wow Finn!I really like it!!!But why did you put the end?

  5. stewk says:
    June 16, 2017 at 1:35 pm

    Wow Finn! I really like it. Why didn,t you start in the forest?

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