Ilai, I love your Blog! I had to go and read part 1. Its fantastic to see you include so many writing devices! Its amazing! It would be fantastic to see more blogs from you.
I love your sentence variation, although you could upgrade your word choice..ie upgrading nice or good to……..
Great job ilia I like “Jeff life part 2 ” it’s really good but check on your spellings you wrote ‘ jut’ instead of ‘ just’ but well done.
P.S: I can find “Jeff life part 1 ” well I tried looking
Muhini
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Ilai, I love your Blog! I had to go and read part 1. Its fantastic to see you include so many writing devices! Its amazing! It would be fantastic to see more blogs from you.
I love your sentence variation, although you could upgrade your word choice..ie upgrading nice or good to……..
Great job ilia I like “Jeff life part 2 ” it’s really good but check on your spellings you wrote ‘ jut’ instead of ‘ just’ but well done.
P.S: I can find “Jeff life part 1 ” well I tried looking
Muhini