JEFF LIFE PART 2

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3 Responses to JEFF LIFE PART 2

  1. skhanum says:

    Ilai, I love your Blog! I had to go and read part 1. Its fantastic to see you include so many writing devices! Its amazing! It would be fantastic to see more blogs from you.

  2. mshuttleworth says:

    I love your sentence variation, although you could upgrade your word choice..ie upgrading nice or good to……..

  3. chowm1 says:

    Great job ilia I like “Jeff life part 2 ” it’s really good but check on your spellings you wrote ‘ jut’ instead of ‘ just’ but well done.

    P.S: I can find “Jeff life part 1 ” well I tried looking

    Muhini

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