Interesting concept of sabotage by sweets Freddy was it all part of a master plan to win the cup? Try a variation of openers, especially once upon a time to set the scene. Eg..A few years ago….In a rustic little village… When my grandfather was a young boy….
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Interesting concept of sabotage by sweets Freddy was it all part of a master plan to win the cup? Try a variation of openers, especially once upon a time to set the scene. Eg..A few years ago….In a rustic little village… When my grandfather was a young boy….
Also upgrade your adjectives such as big and small…what could you use instead?