I liked the humor in it but next time don’t type “I’m close to 100 words so the bully was sick” But over all it was really good.
By Dylan
This is really good Ciaron. I think you need to improve on making your words spell correctly. And it is also really funny in the end.
i loved it so much like a million times but maybe to make it better you can use simile or stuff like that but i really enjoyed reading Well done By Indiya
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I liked the humor in it but next time don’t type “I’m close to 100 words so the bully was sick” But over all it was really good.
By Dylan
This is really good Ciaron. I think you need to improve on making your words spell correctly. And it is also really funny in the end.
i loved it so much like a million times but maybe to make it better you can use simile or stuff like that but i really enjoyed reading Well done By Indiya