Duoyuan, an interesting story/information. Would be better if you varied your sentence openers.
Good Job this is a very cool and a high standard 😀 8/10
I like your title is amazing
I like the rhyming at the beginning maybe if you made it more adventurous i like that the mouse is my mums name.
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Duoyuan, an interesting story/information. Would be better if you varied your sentence openers.
Good Job this is a very cool and a high standard 😀 8/10
I like your title is amazing
I like the rhyming at the beginning maybe if you made it more adventurous i like that the mouse is my mums name.