Really good I like the way you used ellipsis but you didn’t use any full stops and you kept using ‘I’ next time you should check through your work.
Ready good I like the way you check your work next time can you check your full stops.
Well done Charnae I like that you did was and then wrote at the bottom have a good time riding your rip stick and be careful.
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Really good I like the way you used ellipsis but you didn’t use any full stops and you kept using ‘I’ next time you should check through your work.
Ready good I like the way you check your work next time can you check your full stops.
Well done Charnae I like that you did was and then wrote at the bottom have a good time riding your rip stick and be careful.