Well done kiwi
You worked really hard 🙂
OMG KIRIN!!!! This poem is so good. All the descriptions are fabulous!! And my favourite part was when you said ‘ icicles hang off there noses and they struggle to carry on walking’ there was nothing to improve so well done !!!!!
Well done Kirin. The poem was great. Every sentence was fantastic. Of my concern there is nothing to improve on.
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Well done kiwi
You worked really hard 🙂
OMG KIRIN!!!! This poem is so good. All the descriptions are fabulous!! And my favourite part was when you said ‘ icicles hang off there noses and they struggle to carry on walking’ there was nothing to improve so well done !!!!!
Well done Kirin. The poem was great. Every sentence was fantastic. Of my concern there is nothing to improve on.