Good I really like the story but you spelt forest wrong and it was all a bit jumpy but I really like the begging.
I really like you story and I like that is space themed story and please read mine.
Great work I like your story and I love your begging. GOOD WORK
I REALLY LIKE HOW CREATIVE YOU AND I HAVE NEVER SEEN A STORY THAT HAS ALIEN HUNTING!!!
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Good I really like the story but you spelt forest wrong and it was all a bit jumpy but I really like the begging.
I really like you story and I like that is space themed story and please read mine.
Great work I like your story and I love your begging. GOOD WORK
I REALLY LIKE HOW CREATIVE YOU AND I HAVE NEVER SEEN A STORY THAT HAS ALIEN HUNTING!!!