Great poem. Your similes were especially good .Well Done!
This is amazing!!! 🙂 I love your use of rhyming words. Your description is very good. One thing, at the end it says ‘losing all its only power’ maybe it would be better if you drop either the ‘only’ or the ‘all’. but its a great poem!!!!
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Great poem. Your similes were especially good .Well Done!
This is amazing!!! 🙂 I love your use of rhyming words. Your description is very good. One thing, at the end it says ‘losing all its only power’ maybe it would be better if you drop either the ‘only’ or the ‘all’. but its a great poem!!!!