This is great but I think you should improve on your sentences and what you wrote but apart from that it is amazing.
this is great Ella good job i think u should of done a bit more about u not seeing her and tell her name other then that i love it
awwww…. i like the happy ending and how you missed your friend so much, i think u should of given a bit more detail but apart from that……. IT’S BRILLIANT!!!!
That is amazing Ella!
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This is great but I think you should improve on your sentences and what you wrote but apart from that it is amazing.
this is great Ella good job i think u should of done a bit more about u not seeing her and tell her name other then that i love it
awwww…. i like the happy ending and how you missed your friend so much, i think u should of given a bit more detail but apart from that……. IT’S BRILLIANT!!!!
That is amazing Ella!