The Magic Box by Ruby

Posted on June 28, 2016 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The Magic Box by Ruby

  1. meadm says:
    July 1, 2016 at 10:38 am

    Great! I really liked the way you rhymed it however you didn’t rhyme the final bit. Apart from that I loved it!

  2. mayla says:
    July 1, 2016 at 10:41 am

    It is a very tragic story but i like the way it rhymes.
    It is very wonderful poem because the first verse is creepy.

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