This is REALLY good Mae. I love the story you wrote with the five words. The only thing that could be improved is you said who was behind your character that snapped the stick. And plus if no-one was there she wouldn’t of frozen with fear. Would you knock on the door in that position? Ruby
Great suspense! I really liked how your explaining the characters movement and what he does. but I couldn’t find all 5 of the words though.
could you make every one visible please?
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This is REALLY good Mae. I love the story you wrote with the five words. The only thing that could be improved is you said who was behind your character that snapped the stick. And plus if no-one was there she wouldn’t of frozen with fear. Would you knock on the door in that position? Ruby