Fantastic poem Finn! I really can feel your sense of humour and a twist of rhyming too! Try to make it a bit shorter next time so people get chances to read other peoples poems! HeeHee!
Finn, that was absolutely fantastic. I love paragraph five with the opinion to the different apps. The only thing I would say is that on paragraph nine the texts should be in speech marks.
I think this poem is great – you get a real sense of how things out on the web are there forever and for all to see. Really good to remember that. There are some good sides to social media which should not be forgotten as well. Excellent work
BRILLIANT WORK Finn
Thanks,
Could you maybe leave some comments on how I could improve it?
that was a great poem but next time try to make it shorter
Fantastic poem Finn! I really can feel your sense of humour and a twist of rhyming too! Try to make it a bit shorter next time so people get chances to read other peoples poems! HeeHee!
Great but made me tired. Too long for me to read. Also you used ‘where’ instead of ‘were’. But brilliant work.
Finn, that was absolutely fantastic. I love paragraph five with the opinion to the different apps. The only thing I would say is that on paragraph nine the texts should be in speech marks.
I think this poem is great – you get a real sense of how things out on the web are there forever and for all to see. Really good to remember that. There are some good sides to social media which should not be forgotten as well. Excellent work