I really enjoyed reading your poem and the rhyming adds a good affect, the only thing I was confused about was when you wrote (I self a message.) I think you were mistaken for send.
Skye I really enjoyed your poem and some of the rhyming but I was confused about the sentence when it said ‘I pick up my phone and self’ and when you look in the mirror you see a bully maybe you could change that because I got confused and thought are you the bully or are you being the bully or are you writing about someone else being bullied.(I didn’t know which one it was) 🙂
I really enjoyed reading your poem and the rhyming adds a good affect, the only thing I was confused about was when you wrote (I self a message.) I think you were mistaken for send.
Skye I really enjoyed your poem and some of the rhyming but I was confused about the sentence when it said ‘I pick up my phone and self’ and when you look in the mirror you see a bully maybe you could change that because I got confused and thought are you the bully or are you being the bully or are you writing about someone else being bullied.(I didn’t know which one it was) 🙂